This might be your best fic yet! Very vivid, very emotionally engaging. The only thing in the show itself that contradicts that Jane has times when he thinks and feels this way is what he said to Dr. Steiner when he asked Jane to be there when he killed himself. And I think it is still within Jane's character to consider suicide as wrong for other people yet still be tempted to do it himself.
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Date: 2012-08-06 03:04 am (UTC)Excellent work here!